M MrQ Thread Junky Joined Apr 29, 2008 Messages 876 Dec 23, 2008 #44 I love it really. It all flows except for this part: When in 2fort there arose such a clatter, Click to expand... Somehow it feels rather stilted. How about this: When on one server there arose such a clatter Click to expand... Just an idea. Good Job, man!!
I love it really. It all flows except for this part: When in 2fort there arose such a clatter, Click to expand... Somehow it feels rather stilted. How about this: When on one server there arose such a clatter Click to expand... Just an idea. Good Job, man!!
