Revolver sketch

[Abizaga]

Still probably the wrong place but oh well. I created and drew this custom .500 revolver yesterday.

 

[5starGeneralAlphaSnake]

looks good. Did you hand that and scan that?

 

[Mystery Penguin]

You need perspective on the grip, it looks flat compared to the rest of the gun.

 

[Abizaga]

looks good. Did you hand that and scan that?

Thanks! Yeah, I sketched it in my book and scanned it.

You need perspective on the grip, it looks flat compared to the rest of the gun.

Hmmm.... good catch. Thanks for the tip.

 

[Mystery Penguin]

Thanks! Yeah, I sketched it in my book and scanned it.

Hmmm.... good catch. Thanks for the tip.

You're welcome, I think you've pretty much nailed the barrel, but you need to work on the revolving bullet chamber and grip. The grip would be too awkward of placement for actual use, it needs to point outward to the left more.

 

[Abizaga]

You're welcome, I think you've pretty much nailed the barrel, but you need to work on the revolving bullet chamber and grip. The grip would be too awkward of placement for actual use, it needs to point outward to the left more.

I think you're probably right about the revolving chamber, as I can't get the bullet placement correctly, nor the bullet separation. I probably messed up with the grip when I added in the custom engraved icon. I can see how awkward the trigger placement is, too. Thanks.
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