a beat i made in FL studio's

[Ice hearted killer]

heyy all, i wanted some crit on this beat i did, its not done i know it needs some work, length and a melody but i havent done that yet what do you think?
EDIT:
[ame]http://rapidshare.com/files/227664519/techno_start.wav[/ame]

 

[Nightmare -]

Well TBH it's not really a beat... It's more of an intro, I don't know the technical name atm.

But if you could work it out more refined and longer, it would be easier to critisize it.

 

[Hoodie]

Yeah, that is not a beat. Like Nightmare said, it is more of an intro / drum roll type of "theme".

And I'd say it's about half a second too long as an intro.

 

[Ice hearted killer]

my bad just realised i uploaded the one that went weird for some reason it only saved like 3 seconds of it. hmm. il change the link.

 

[Hoodie]

my bad just realised i uploaded the one that went weird for some reason it only saved like 3 seconds of it. hmm. il change the link.

Is it now the new one?

 

[Hoodie]

Okay. That was pretty good. Could use a little more in the middle section though as it gets a little bland.

Love the opening, love the ending.

 

[Kognit0]

How do I listen to it when I'm not member in rapidshare? -_-

 

[Mystery Penguin]

[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PZumb9-ceqE[/ame]

this is teh serious techno... minus lyrics

 

[Ice hearted killer]

kognit0 just download it as a free member
penguin that was very helpful *insert sarcasm if you didn't guess already *

 

[Ice hearted killer]

any one else got any suggestions on how o improve it?

 

[ZANtehMAN!]

u need to change it but making it a clean transition into the next kind of beat which is very chalenging

 

[-Jv-]

The last 45secs were the same..

 

[Ice hearted killer]

JV i know that i intended to extend it and add in some thing else in variouse points to make it differnetn.
what do you mean zan im confused.