Need FEEDBACK

[MrDudes]

Hey Guys i got bored today didnt really play any tf2 cuz i had a night class today and got off around 9 and got home around 930ish far far parking .... sucks lol haha so i was on the internet just looking around and i got inspired so i downloaded some brushes for GIMP and i made 2 images help me out on the image and tell me feedback lol haha D=

Its the black and gray one or vice versa lol haha ....
i have uploaded them to a website so here it is :
Game Spray WIP

 

[Byakuya]

Its got a hiphop/urban feel. I like it, nice job. Could use some color tho.

 

[MrDudes]

thank you for ur feed back =]

 

[Ice hearted killer]

looks good, i agree with byakuya good urban feel a bit of colour would be good as well

 

[Lucky_Bogg]

I really like it but I think it would be better if you changed some colors in it..Maybe the words or the background but other than that it looks really good!