2 new ones

[lSeYeKol]

I had some time to get on cs4 omfg Lmfao.. anyways here they are

<--- one i made myself

<--- one i made a friend

so Feedback please

 

[Simon]

I love the second one

 

[lSeYeKol]

I love the second one

Awwh Thx , what about my first one

 

[Kryptonian]

I like both of them

 

[Simon]

Awwh Thx , what about my first one

First ones decent, just didnt like how you did the border

 

[CanadianNoOB]

I like the first one. Only thing I don't like is the text. The c4d over the render is bothersome in some cases.

The second one could use some better lighting and depth. It looks flat to me. The outer glow on the text could go too.

Good work though.

 

[Britishbrat1993]

I'm relle liking the second one. First ones awesome too

 

[Chairface]

The second one is sexy. Lol. First one is done really good, I just don't like the render and color blends.

 

[Putty]

First one: See how your flow is going left to right, mostly. Well, putting a border of that nature on the sides kills that flow. Maybe put the border on the bottom / top. The text seems a bit bland also. Maybe try using a smaller text, yellow'ish, and nest it right under his arm and by his torso.

Second one: See how your text is overlapping her hair slightly? I'd say to nudge that text down and to the right. Put it right in the concave curve of her hair. And as someone said, take off the outer glow lol. Or at least lower the opacity.