Hehe ^.^ grats on your first frag video koth. Don't let other people bring you down , everyone had to start somewhere right :3?
Word of advice, don't use cl_drawhud 0 for the whole entire clip. Just use it when you're smoothing(of course) OR when the shot is really obvious that you got the kill.
Edit: DOH! other people already pointed that out :O. My bad <3!
Oh and sometimes during the video, it was hard to see what team you are on. Removing everything is not the best solution. I say you keep kills, health/team at the bear minimum.