Looks good man..but here are the thing that i said to you on msn
first thing i see when i look at it, it needs lighting,
it needs a light source that is pretty bright and has an effect on the focal,
+ needs some black on the other side of the light source to have some balance between light and dark
,then i see that the render is small..you gotta make the render bigger and make it cover up more space then you are doing..like in bya's post it is bigger, more attracting the eye, then you gotta make some depth using the blur tool, like on the longest parts away from the focal need to be blurred a little, then little bit near, little blur, then no blur around the focal, so it creates this good depth feeling to it..but its a nice signature,it would look great with those things that i said, + the colors are quite not matching there imo..gradient map set to 30% would make it blend more, or gradient map set to soft light that contains 2 colors in the signature
But its a nice signature, dont forget that man
