Another sig my friends!

[Nightmare490]

tell me what you think guys!



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[Byakuya]

The colors are nice, nice render placement. Lacking in the flow department though. nice job.

 

[Nightmare490]

thank you ill try to do better with the flow in my next one.

 

[Duality]

The middle line is too thick and is attracting attention to it rather than the focal point of the image. Make the line narrower and try adding some very light low opacity gradient overlays (maybe color dodge or soft light) over the render area and darker further away. I'm talking subtle here, it does wonders.

 

[Nightmare490]

ok tell me if this is any better. i added some light around her and brightened her area up more and put a brush over the middle black line.

 

[Heisenberg 99.1]

I like this one way better.

 

[Simon]

The brushing around the render is nice, but elsewhere seems to lose itself. The text in the center is a bit of a throwoff. Try to center the render a little more so you can fill a bit more


Overall, this is a great progress from your last work . Nice job, looking forward to seeing you improve

 

[BlackBird.]

Nice I like it.

 

[Vexx]

The differential between the lighter, more bluer side where the girl is seems a little offset to me by the other side's black strokes. The text is slightly hard to read as well. But those are just my opinions.

And also in my opinion, I think it's great! Excellent job again mate!

 

[Nightmare490]

lol ill put the name somewhere else and just try to make the line in the middle not as attracting xD and maybe add a little black to the render side so kind of even it out with the other side?

 

[Kim Possible]

once again you have outdone ur self night *claps*

 

[Nightmare490]

once again you have outdone ur self night *claps*

^^ lol thank you! Hey if anyone knows where to get some really good Nightmare Before Christmas renders and kind of Halloween/Gothic brushes please PM me,