You may remember.....

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A LONG LONG time ago, when I was only a few weeks or so old here I made a thread about a machinima I wrote. It was called You Got Surged, this then lead me to the machinima team, where it was pending, but never accepted. I was talking with DeathBlade the other day about his machinima and I was like "Hey remember that machinima thing I made?" he was like "Yea it was a cool idea" he asked me if he could have the scripts for ideas, it took me 4 hours, searching thru every folder on my old computer. I then found it in the Recycle bin, episodes 2 and 3 where number 1 went IDK. Anyways I am starting to go thru and edit it, mainly to fix spelling, but also to add more things to make certain parts make more sense. I felt so dumb when I read the script over, look at one of these lines

solider 3: sarge you might wanna see this

sarge: what is it

solider 3: its a note

Watch out, we spotted the eGO coming here earlier be alert watch your backs and regroup
if possible

Anyways, they both have a lot of spelling mistakes and is wondering if anyone would like to help me, and add some more fire fight scenes where they see fit. I only want 2 people so yeah