Should phantom write a series on....

[Phantom373]

edgegamers jail. What it would be like is.. well... heres an example (it would be in map days, like ex:day 1 devs)

Day 1, Devs:
I was waking up from my cell, the lighting within the cell was poorly lit, The smell of the cell was horrid, but it didnt seem to bug me. I looked over and i see my cell mate.
" Hello, And who might you be?" I asked
"VP, who are you?"
"Phantom"
After that he just kept staring outside the cell, His eyes were following something so i finally got out of the bed and saw what he was looking at, 12 CT's all with automatic weapons.
"No way we can break out" said VP
"What do you mean? Of course there is no way! we are terrorists!"
"If we are lucky we can make a break for it to the vent cell." VP seemed to have the serious face on, he had no emotion what so ever. I began to wonder what he did to get in here.

That would be a sneak preview of it, it would pretty much be one whole round. SO i would like opinions on this and if i should make this a real series to post on the forums

 

[waffles!]

thats pretty awesome man , ill buy

 

[Phantom373]

:w00t: thanx

 

[Ramp]

CSS jail manga

 

[Sequel Sentry]

Well, it depends, you want to make sure things are varied and exciting. One round of jail can be loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong...

 

[_MEGA]

+1 ramp.

 

[swat5]

That sounds cool you should do it

 

[ricky511]

cool i would read all of it!

 

[Phantom373]

Day 1, Maximum:
I was waking up from my cell, the lighting within the cell was poorly lit, The smell of the cell was horrid, but it didnt seem to bug me. I looked over and i see my cell mate.
" Hello, And who might you be?" I asked
"VP, who are you?"
"Phantom"
After that he just kept staring outside the cell, His eyes were following something so i finally got out of the bed and saw what he was looking at, 12 CT's all with automatic weapons.
"No way we can break out" said VP
"What do you mean? Of course there is no way! we are terrorists!"
"If we are lucky we can make a break for it to the vent cell." VP seemed to have the serious face on, he had no emotion what so ever. I began to wonder what he did to get in here.
"We will have to wait for orders to see if we can." Said VP
"What do you mean? even if there was a vent cell how could we break it?"
"look behind the bed." I walked over to the back of the bed and saw it, a giant pile of knives. I didnt want to question where he got these so i grabbed the sharpest one in the pile and put it in my holster. Apprently they didnt take my holster when they found me.
"OKAY! ALL T'S! WHEN THE CELL DOOR OPENS WALK UP TO THE RAILING AND FREEZE" Boomed the warden.
"OW! that was loud," I said.
"Okay man you, me, jensen, Xspire, and zimmy are going to rush the vents, the vent is on our right hand side 2 cells over, when cells open run staright to it, got it? whispered VP
"Okay" I didnt want to question what to do, I mind as well make a break for it than live in jail. Right then the cells opened, My first few steps were slow, I took a good look at my surroundings, taking note of where every ct was. Then I saw VP running, so i followed him, me and him ran into the cell and immideiatly broke the vent and went inside.
VP said to wait for the rest But before he could finish that sentence we saw there bodies fly into the vent. They were dead.
"CRAP! its special forces!" VP yelled. I have heard rumors about this specialforcespanda hes supposed to be the biggest baddest CT of them all, hardest to kill . Before he could get another shot off with his awp me and VP kept running through the vents. We found two guns at the end of the vent
"Where now?" I asked.
"Up" exclaimed VP. I looked up and saw that there was another vent, VP broke it and we jumped up to the top of it, We were now outside and VP said we should run towards the disco there is a mac-10 in there. I was so confused, why would a Mac-10 be in a disco. Why would a disco be in jail? I stopped questioning everything and decided to roll with it. We ran into the disco where we saw a CT standing there, he was facing the wall not even moving. VP took this chance ran up to him and knifed him in the back.
"HEY!" exclaimed a voice. The voice sounded like a girl.
"Whos there?" asked both me and VP
"The name is Clarissa"
"what are you doing here Clarissa?" asked VP.
"Im on special treatment, So im gonna dance!" yelled Clarissa.
"We are trying to break out can you point us to the mac-10? I asked
"I already took that, i have it here i dont need it im just gonna keep dancing" Said Clarissa. She tosses us the mac-10 and begins saying "AROUND THE WORLD AROUND THE WORLD!" There wasnt any music playing but we didnt want to ruin her fun. So we ran out of the disco and back towards the cells.
"Why are we running back towards them!? we should try and break out of this area." I yelled

Here is n update to it, I've been working on it some more, i'm expecting the whole thing to come out sometime next weekend, hopefully Friday maybe earlier.

 

[Ric]

where are the girls?
COME ON MAN, MAKE IT INTERESTING FOR PEOPLE LIKE ME.

I WANNA SEE NAKED GIRLS IN YOUR STORIES.

Hahahahaha.

 

[Phantom373]

where are the girls?
COME ON MAN, MAKE IT INTERESTING FOR PEOPLE LIKE ME.

I WANNA SEE NAKED GIRLS IN YOUR STORIES.

Hahahahaha.

you will be in my story, Ric the AFK ct, lolololl and if you want girls MAKE YOUR OWN STORY!

 

[Raul Tha Monk]

go for it

 

[Clarissa]

Around the world around the world!

 

[Shadow19]

What an inconsiderate and rude thing to say, Ric! Women are not objects sent here to please you. If you're a lady and you agree with my white knight post, please feel free to hit me up on steam

 

[LadyFace]

What an inconsiderate and rude thing to say, Ric! Women are not objects sent here to please you. If you're a lady and you agree with my white knight post, please feel free to hit me up on steam

omg

U r suu right

let me add you on steam nao

heh heh heh

...Gawd, you are so dumb.

 

[Ric]

What an inconsiderate and rude thing to say, Ric! Women ARE objects sent here to please you. If you're a lady and you agree with my white knight post, please feel free to hit me up on steam

Fixed.

 

[Phantom373]

lol

 

[Frank The Tank]

Do it man

 

[LadyFace]

fixed.

winning.

 

[penguin]

Ric im pretty sure these are jail stories.
not your little fantasies that you have in your head