Jailbreak Day 1 Maximum

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Day 1, Maximum:
I was waking up from my cell, the lighting within the cell was poorly lit, The smell of the cell was horrid, but it didnt seem to bug me. I looked over and I see my cell mate.
" Hello, and who might you be?" I asked
"VP, who are you?"
"Phantom"
After that he just kept staring outside the cell, His eyes were following something so i finally got out of the bed and saw what he was looking at, 12 CT's all with automatic weapons.
"No way we can break out" said VP
"What do you mean? Of course there is no way! we are terrorists!"
"If we are lucky we can make a break for it to the vent cell." VP seemed to have the serious face on, he had no emotion what so ever. I began to wonder what he did to get in here.
"We will have to wait for orders to see if we can." Said VP
"What do you mean? even if there was a vent cell how could we break it?"
"look behind the bed." I walked over to the back of the bed and saw it, a giant pile of knives. I didnt want to question where he got these so i grabbed the sharpest one in the pile and put it in my holster. Apparently they didnt take my holster when they found me.
"OKAY! ALL T'S! WHEN THE CELL DOOR OPENS WALK UP TO THE RAILING AND FREEZE" Boomed the warden.
"OW! that was loud," I said.
"Okay man you, me, jensen, Xspire, and zimmy are going to rush the vents, the vent is on our right hand side 2 cells over, when cells open run staright to it, got it? whispered VP
"Okay" I didnt want to question what to do, I mind as well make a break for it than live in jail. Right then the cells opened, My first few steps were slow, I took a good look at my surroundings, taking note of where every ct was. Then I saw VP running, so i followed him, me and him ran into the cell and immideiatly broke the vent and went inside.
VP said to wait for the rest But before he could finish that sentence we saw their bodies fly into the vent. They were dead.
"CRAP! its special forces!" VP yelled. I have heard rumors about this specialforcespanda hes supposed to be the biggest baddest CT of them all, hardest to kill . Before he could get another shot off with his awp me and VP kept running through the vents. We found two guns at the end of the vent
"Where now?" I asked.
"Up" exclaimed VP. I looked up and saw that there was another vent, VP broke it and we jumped up to the top of it, We were now outside and VP said we should run towards the disco there is a mac-10 in there. I was so confused, why would a Mac-10 be in a disco. Why would a disco be in jail? I stopped questioning everything and decided to roll with it. We ran into the disco where we saw a CT standing there, he was facing the wall not even moving. VP took this chance ran up to him and knifed him in the back.
"HEY! You killed butcher!" exclaimed a voice. The voice sounded like a girl.
"Whos there?" asked both me and VP
"The name is Clarissa"
"what are you doing here Clarissa?" asked VP.
"Im on special treatment, So im gonna dance!" yelled Clarissa.
"We are trying to break out can you point us to the mac-10? I asked
"I already took that, i have it here i dont need it im just gonna keep dancing" Said Clarissa. She tosses us the mac-10 and begins saying "AROUND THE WORLD AROUND THE WORLD!" There wasnt any music playing but we didnt want to ruin her fun. So we ran out of the disco and back towards the cells.
"Why are we running back towards them!? we should try and break out of this area." I yelled
"No use our best chance is to kill all the cts and then break out." VP exclaimed, VP seemed experienced at this, has he broken out before? So many questions were running through my head, but the more I answered the more questions I had. We continued through the hallway leading up the the ct area. We began to walk slowly, Or as the cts would call it "Shift walking." We rounded the corner only to be face to face with a ct.
"End of the line for you two" said the mysterious voice.
"Says who! there are two of us and only 1 of you!" excalimed VP
"Haha, before i knock the both of you out i should tell you, My name is Radoslav, Now goodbye" said Radoslav
"what do you mean goodbye?" asked VP Right after the question he fell to the ground, I looked behind us only to find specialforcespanda staring at me.
"Welcome to EdgeGamers" said Special as he hits me with the butt of the Awp.
 
i thought it was great! do more plz i will read all of them and look forward to them! i give it 5/5 thumbsup
 
Needs more Kek and TF2.

Other than that, its pretty good.. good job so far :)
 
this is nice man. i like the creativity. you should include me screwing up and getting all the CTs killed xD
 
wow...nice narration phantom! hehe looks like I'll play more jail if I want to figure out here
 
Nice post Phantom!

Just a helpful suggestion to keep down the number of threads might I suggest when you finish a new part of the story that you edit your original post and then make a new post in this thread notifying people that the story has been updated.
 
i love it! 10/10 after you finish the series, you should make a video series that go along with the story to!
 

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