Day 2 Alcatraz Part 1

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Day 2: Alcatraz Part 1

Everything was bright, I was trying to remember what happened. Where was VP? Where am I? I started to sit up. I looked below my bed and on the bottom bunk was VP.
?VP! You awake?? I asked.
?Uhhhggg. Who are you?? asked VP.
?Its me Phantom VP.? I exclaimed.
?I don?t know any Phantom? Said VP with a curios look on his face. I assumed he must have amnesia from that blow to the head, it was pretty bad. I told him the story of what happened hoping that it would jog his memory, didn?t seem to help.
?Can you fellows be quite, I?m trying to sing my favorite song!? Yelled a voice.
?Who?s there?? VP and I asked.
?I am Soul_of_a_Sinner? said the man named Soul
?The cells wont be opening for another minute, so I?m going to sing some more? said soul
Then with the most Horrid voice ever he starts singing, APPLE BOTTOM JEANS JEANS BOOTS WITH DA FUR WITH DA FUR!!!?
Me and VP covered our heads in our pillow waiting for the cells to open.
?So you don?t remember anything VP?? I asked.
?No not any of it, so what are we going to do?? VP asked.
?I don?t know yet, perhaps we should listen to these orders and see how things play out.? I suggested.
?Agreed?
?OKAY ALL T?S WHEN THE CELLS OPEN I WANT YOU TO SHIFT WALK BACKWARDS HIT YOUR RAILING AND FREEZE!? boomed the warden.
?Well here goes nothing? VP said. As VP and I did as the warden told us to I saw many people die, The Counter Terrorists were being complete jerks to the people that didn?t follow the simple order. Either way me and VP had to try and stay alive.
As we waited for the warden to give new orders I began to think back about what special had said.
?Welcome to Edgegamers.? What was Edgegamers? Maybe some of the other T?s know.
?Hey, Can I ask you a question?? I asked to the t next to me.
?Sure, but I would prefer we knew each others name before I answer any.? said the mysterious T.
?My name is Phantom, What is yours?
?My name is Sigma.? ?So what is your question??
?I want to know if you know what Edgegamers is.?
?Well none of us really know but its supposed to be the organization hat runs this whole thing.? said Sigma.
After that we stayed quite cause the warden was getting mad at us talking. The warden then told us to run to the climb. I had no idea where it was but I decided to follow sigma because he seem to know where he was going. Behind was VP, He seemed quite scared from all the guards with guns pointed right at him. As we made our way to climb the warden told us to jump to the first block and freeze. We all made the first jump and waited on the block, it was beyond crowded. Some people began falling off due to the lack of room, and if they fell the CT?s shot them were they stood!
?When I say GO you can begin, if you fall you die!? Boomed the warden. VP, Sigma and I were all standing on the block waiting for warden to say go, as we waited we noticed another CT standing behind us I looked at him and recognized him immediately, it was SpecialForcesPanda.
?GO!? Boomed the warden.
 
I knew i should at least post something today, so i split in in half and made it parts, that way you guys have a new cliffhanger to hang on to :)
 
Very well, Phantom. For such a short age your narrative is well structured. I hope my char dont die on the climb, im horrible playing it :D
 
More More More!!!

And lets hear more about that warden too, what was his name? Mr. Boe Jangles? Oh Yeah
 
wow so cool phantom brother! that's an awesome story, but where's your bro in this story? :D us phantom's need to stick togetha!!!
 
Needs more VP and less Panda. :D

Just kidding. Keep 'em coming!
 

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