Day 3:Canyon Part 1

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"So what have you learned so far VP?" Said a mysterious Voice.
"I hate doing this just to get my crime record clear! But not much, I promise to get more out of Phantom today" Said VP
"Good" Said the mysterious voice.
"Now Special you promise my record will be cleared?" Asked VP
"Of course" Said SpecialForcesPanda

Chapter 1 VP
We were back in our cell, I knew i had to get more info on why Phantom did what he did. I just had to or else I would be executed.
"Hey Phantom you awake?"
"Yea, where is Sigma?" Asked Phantom
"I don't know, He must be in a different cell." "Can I ask you something Phantom?" Asked VP
"Go for it" Said Phantom
"Well I was wondering what did y--...." Before I could finish the sentence another person in our cell interrupted me. "Could you guys be quite? I?m trying to focus on my escape!" said a voice.
As he was saying that i noticed there was another terrorist, but this guy was just standing there.
"Who are you two?"
"I am iamevilbear"
"What about the other fellow over there?" I asked
"That?s Ric He is off in his own little world, He won?t say anything, he won?t move, and he won?t do anything!" explained iamevilbear.
I didn?t feel like asking more questions so I went back to talking to Phantom.

Chapter 2 Sigma
I awoke inside my cell and not 5 seconds after opening my eyes I hear someone from the cell over.
"PSSSTTT buddy" Said a voice
"Yea?" I asked
"Does your cell have no carpet?" Asked the voice.
"Ummm well Yes, Why? Who is this?"
"My name is Kami, and if you knife your toilet it will break the floor and you can escape!" Yelled Kami.
"Will you come with me?" Asked Sigma
"I will when the cells open, When you go inside the vent hide behind the ladder when I come down you and me can escape"
"Okay" Sigma then broke the toilet and went and did exactly what Kami said.

Chapter 3 SpecialForces
"I promise VP will be able to get the Information you want!" I said to the 2 people who could have me killed in a heartbeat with no questions asked.
"Well make sure it?s less messy than yesterday, which was horrible I lost 3 men!" Yelled Cryptex
"Yea Special I mean that was horrible I could have died!" Exclaimed the Warden A.K.A Mr Boe Jangles.
"Listen I promise VP can get this Information, He will do it no matter what because his life is on the line!" I said.
"Well I sure hope so Special Because your job and LIFE is on the line!" Yelled Cryptex
Cryptex can be quite the grump, but I would never say that to his face because I would be dead in a heartbeat.
As Boe and Cryptex walked away I began to feel nervous, What if VP couldn?t get the Info?
As all the questions roared through my head I heard Boe give the first order to the Terrorists.
As Boe Began Talking I got up Grabbed my AWP and the pistol, Suited up and walked out into
the cellblock.
 
"My name is Kami, and if you knife your toilet it will break the floor and you can escape!"

And then he went down the ladder, out into the water, grabbed the awp and well lets just say the T's escaped.
 
No, I'm talking about Kami. By the end of the story Sigma is still hiding behind the ladder.
 
No, I'm talking about Kami. By the end of the story Sigma is still hiding behind the ladder.

Whaaa? Im having Pi?as Coladas at my beach house by that time....right??


BTW Ric Reference = 1000000% awesomeness
 
Awsome! Next time, pick me in the story, and show that I escape the Jail, by doing parkour.
 
How about a bit more length, and more action sequences than actual dialogue? Just a suggestion. Maybe organize it by paragraphs to make it easier to read.
 
Could People also comment on how the length is. If you think it needs to be longer please either comment here or PM me, And when you think it needs to be longer give me a chapter wise. like 5,6,7 etc....
 
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