Hmm...On the right track, has a sound of Stairway to Heaven (Not saying it sounds like it, but for some reason i thought of it when i heard it) that i like. My taste of music though, doesn't fit this. I'm a hard metal kinda person. Has to have fast paced drum beat (Double bass prefered), a guitar that can melt your face, and singer that can go from a deep scream to a harmonic tone.
You have the guitar, and a generally nice drummer. Honestly, i'd give that guitarist an award. He seems like he'd fit in with Led Zeppelin, or maybe The Eagles but its a little too soft for me (but thats just my taste)
Overall, this is a great song, great band, and if you ever record a demo, link me to it. I'll download it with pleasure.