A story

[Blinkster93]

Hey i was wondering, from the community. That (so far wrote like 7 pages) if this sounds like a good story. And here it is; its about vampires, you can laugh now. Keep in mind that its not a crappy love story like twilight;who ruin vampires. but more like vampire the masquerade bloodlines (great game) kind of story. But instead follows the story of a vampire trying to find out his former life as a human and of course find others like him. Theirs lots of violence in it and action, and maybe just MAYBE; i might put in a little love in it. that's a little of the overview cant really discuses the whole thing.

 

[Raul Tha Monk]

Well finish writing and give me a free book and twilight was alright u need some stop hateing it isnt good for you

 

[Blinkster93]

make take some time for it and no the book was good its just the damn actors mess it up. I have like the first the second but never finish the rest

 

[Spitfire'd]

Vampires all the rage right now, in danger of being played out. But what stands out about yours is that he has no memory of his life as a human. That would be an interesting tale, a quest to discover. Probably run into a lot of vampires and/or humans that don't want to know about their past, or don't want him to know about his.

When doing a popular theme it is important to approach it from a unique angle. I'm the last person to know about such things, but it really sounds like you have a good start!

 

[Blinkster93]

thanks man just wanted to do something different but have to think more and more things i can put in besides vampires and humans. maybe put in zombies or something unnatural