Dj December - Its Over (Piano Remix)

[kYuKi]

[ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dbCAlcbPiHI[/ame]

Enjoy, I would like some feed back on it; negative or positive.

 

[SKYLINEGTR]

1. Shorten the intro. A lot of songs never get listened to with long and slow intros like that.

2. I like the melody, but you might wanna tweak the volume on some parts. One second its really loud and the next it dies down rather randomly.

3. Also, the ending didn't work that well with me. Especially around 1:54 where it went from a upbeat part to a slow and relaxed part without any real good transition to it. And then 2:20 where it picked back up again with a upbeat tempo.

Overall you're doing an excellent job and hope some of my suggestions help you.

Not many people can sit there and create music and I give your respect for your work kYuKi!

 

[kYuKi]

1. Shorten the intro. A lot of songs never get listened to with long and slow intros like that.

2. I like the melody, but you might wanna tweak the volume on some parts. One second its really loud and the next it dies down rather randomly.

3. Also, the ending didn't work that well with me. Especially around 1:54 where it went from a upbeat part to a slow and relaxed part without any real good transition to it. And then 2:20 where it picked back up again with a upbeat tempo.

Overall you're doing an excellent job and hope some of my suggestions help you.

Not many people can sit there and create music and I give your respect for your work kYuKi!

Thank you! As for the volume problem, I was trying to lessen the "bubble/wobble" sound when I reversed part of the beat. And to try and create a transition warning that it's going to change soon.

The intro was the two main piano pieces I found titled "It's over." That's where the name came in. Did you notice how the piano and the beats played out together at the end? Listen closely, that's what I was aiming for at the end. And I felt like I had to end it some where, or it'd be really long because I had a ton of ideas to go with it. I just didn't want to over do it.

As for the tempo and the poor transitioning near the end, who knows. All in all, I fell in love with this song lol, even though I made it.

 

[Darth]

Completely opposite opinions to skyline, I liked the long into but only because that contained the piano bit. Once it got into techno I lost interest, would've preferred it if you did more with the piano, or integrated it a bit more with the techno, I think I could hear it slightly but it was just barely there.

Overall good job.

Also can you send me a link to the piano section that you used?

 

[kYuKi]

Completely opposite opinions to skyline, I liked the long into but only because that contained the piano bit. Once it got into techno I lost interest, would've preferred it if you did more with the piano, or integrated it a bit more with the techno, I think I could hear it slightly but it was just barely there.

Overall good job.

Also can you send me a link to the piano section that you used?

I have a taste of both classical instruments, like the piano, and techno. Mixing the two makes it worth while if you know what you're doing.

http://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/56044
http://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/56043
That's the piano ones I used. Same song, but split up.

 

[Dodgy]

What program are you using to put this all together? I really liked it, in my opinion though for an intro with a build up like that the song could stand to actually be longer. I REALLY liked the reverse part, that was pretty creative man.

 

[kYuKi]

What program are you using to put this all together? I really liked it, in my opinion though for an intro with a build up like that the song could stand to actually be longer. I REALLY liked the reverse part, that was pretty creative man.

Can't give out all my secrets in just one thread now lol. And thanks.