School Art

[FusioN^]

Hey guys

I just started a new semester of my Graphic Design class where I have to make a new piece every week.

I am going to be putting all of my art throughout the semester in this thread, so let me know what you think!

I really appreciate any constructive criticism you guys have!

Week #1

 

[TomsSound]

The Spiderman part is pretty good. The text part is lacking .
So you could go both ways... either go subtle and let the spiderman art take center stage (figuratively.) try to move him into the "rule of thirds"
Or try to make the Spiderman Text match the rest of the art. Possibly give it the similar effects

Right now the text feels as though it was an afterthought and feels unfinished.

But really there are so many directions you can go with this...
Good start though.

 

[FusioN^]

Thanks for the feedback!

Do you think the text looks better like this? I tried to take a piece of his chest and I applied it as a pattern on the text.