my new song - "Wake Up & Coffee," thoughts?

[frantic.^]

Hey, my name's frantic.^(Danny). Some of you may remember my previous post about a song I had been working on.
Well, here's another one (for better or worse)!
Please, tell me what you guys/gals think? (it helps me get better!)

(the track isn't mastered yet btw, lots of EQing left to do, but I hope you still enjoy it)

:thumbup:

Here's the link:
https://soundcloud.com/ghost_horse-1/wake-up-coffee

 

[Mr. Monday]

This hasn't had any replies yet? Such a disgrace.

As a fan of House/various <noun> hop style music... I loved this song. In my personal opinion, I think it could use a bit more drive (but seeing as how it's tagged Lounge, I'm fairly sure it's right where it should be).

Keep at it!

 

[Maserati]

I like it, reminds me of this rooftop lounge I went to in nyc

 

[frantic.^]

Hey Mr. Monday and Maserati, thank you! I really appreciate the feedback, and I definitely agree it could have used more "umphf." If you're ever interested in hearing more of my stuff (which I'll try to post on here occasionally), I'm working under a new account with my friend. The link is:
https://soundcloud.com/malasound-1

Thanks again!!