Personal Media Projects

[Mr_Nicoll]

Hey guys,

Recently i've been painstakingly editing and adjusting some footage i've shot from a recent sports day at the school i'm at. All of these were made in my Media class.

There's about 4 iterations of the footage, 3 of which running along either vocal or instrumental versions of Rammstein's "Stripped" (Remix of the original Depeche Mode one).

Anyway's, before I ramble on and on (like most Scot's), here's links to the videos i've made, all feedback and criticism is greatly welcomed and I encourage it.

Original music video of inspiration:
[ame="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BmqmL4lzfRo"]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BmqmL4lzfRo[/ame]

Iteration 1:
[ame="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cIoJZIKITXo"]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cIoJZIKITXo[/ame]

Final Iteration:
[ame="https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A1q7YiHsgZ0"]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A1q7YiHsgZ0[/ame]

 

[Kamikaze Bad Ass]

OK first off i like the fact that you included very old and modern videos and scenes and the Olympics kinda gives ya a history feel to it WHICH I LIKE and even thou not normally my kinda music you picked a very good selection and has good tempo and gives the video a very good vibe that's make you want you want to watch or listen to the whole thing
and i'm guessing your in high school your video editing and compiling is the best i have probably ever seen and very very professional too that is noteworthy of a Emmy or a Oscar by itself

i can tell you have a lot of practice at this and no joke you would possibly have a career in film and production if you so chose to achieve that goal and go to film school i would no joke be watching your future endeavors very closely

my only complaint would be to edit or remove the nude or nearly nude scenes cause there not necessary also if this is a project for school your teacher or professor might give you negative grades or comments for that and also on a clan/ community basis we do have alot of younger members that really don't need to see that i'm sure you could find others clips to replace them with or just remove them and wouldn't hinder the film

that's just my personal belief thou and you don't have to go by mine alone

VERY GOOD WORK AND A VERY GOOD VIDEO

 

[Mr_Nicoll]

Cheerie Kamikaze, :thumbup:

The only things which have had concern expressed are the semi-nude scenes, as mentioned, as well as the "faded Swastikas" at the start/running of the torch- with minor concern over the "Nazi Salutes" in the background- which have been cropped out to the best of my ability.

Definitely noting the institutional and age-group(s) as the constraints of the video- making it suitable for all- if not most of the target audience.

Again, thankyou for the comments- much appreciated. :thumbup: