I Made This Attempt at a Wallpaper

Poizezto

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Hey everyone, I'm pretty new to eGO, so I thought I'd make a thread. Recently I've been trying to learn how to use Cinema 4d, and this one of the first projects I've started. Let me know what you think, constructive criticism is always helpful. :)
http://imgur.com/GcWZGLW
 
Do you think you could take requests and do some for other members? It's awsome!
 
pls no hateronis but I think there are a few things that could use some work.

First off, the texture of the wall doesn't really compliment the wallpaper. If you look at the reflections on the P and Z letters, on the front faces its shiny and reflects sharp, cubic image while its sides reflect a gravely but splotchy image. It also makes the "Edge Gaming Organization" far more difficult to read than it should be. I think a smooth gradient in a color that compliments the blue would serve you much better.

Second, Although simplicity is nice, the pure white and solid but extremely reflective blue just don't compliment each other that well. I'm not sure what would be the best fix, whether it be making your name more an off-white or making the blue less reflective. I think that keeping the floor reflective but making the blue far less reflective would make it much easier on the eyes. It may also just be that a change in the wall graphic could fix it.

Lastly, I feel the image is too sharp. Although it's nice to see crisp edges in a picture, if everything in the picture has sharp edges, it's almost like the image is poking my eyes. I would say that the best thing to change would be the large letters, as their thickness really makes the edges stand out more than the rest and doesn't compliment the image as a whole.


Overall, my favorite things are the ways the shadows compliment your name and the appearance of the "Edge Gamers Organization" reflection on the white floor. I really think that the picture could benefit a whole lot from a change in that texture on the wall.
 
Try and add the eGO logo to it too! Just throwing out ideas
 

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