New Track, Thoughts?

[frantic.^]

Hey everyone, my name on here is frantic but I make music under MALA.
I just finished working on a track I made and I'm still relatively new to making music,
so just looking for some feedback from the community so I can get better

Hope you like it!

https://soundcloud.com/malasound-1/mala-headphone-noise-play

 

[pillar]

Well its a little mellow/ambient for my taste, but from listening to electronica for over 10 years now, I gotta say that its overall very well put together. Some of it does sound very "novice"ish, especially at the beginning, but it really seems to come together as the person starts to listen to it more. You definitely have some more work to do if you want to either polish it or possibly make more music, but overall, very fine job with this track.

 

[Helpless Glint]

It's mellow. I enjoyed it. But the begging(first 30 secs) seems to long.But overall it's great. Keep it up.

 

[a3yko]

good not my style but fantastic