My First Gameplay!

[Misterboy]

Hey guys! Me again. Today I recorded my first gameplay on Borneo as spy. I'd appreciate if you guys would take a look at it and give me some feedback! Also, should I make more gameplays? Let me know! I appreciate it

[ame]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=v9sufEjDVjM[/ame]

(Also my commentary is awkward but ehhhhhhh)

 

[PepperRabbit]

I myself watch a lot of commentary gameplays of different youtubers, so I can give you some pointers when it comes to those. Your first minute or so is probably the best part of the commentary. Meaning you don't need to talk about your gameplay like you did for the rest of the video, ie. we can see what's happening you don't need to explain it. There are points in gameplay where you do need to explain why you did a certain move let's say but not the whole thing. My suggestion would be to talk about the weapons more and why you use them. There was a huge patch that changed a lot of the weapons recently, you probably could of talked about that more in detail and how you saw those changes. That's my two cents. Good video btw

 

[Chickens]

Misterboy you're so good, teach me senpai?