I Made This Avatar

[AcidRainBurns]

Looking for some feedback on this avatar I made.

 

[Leo_Lam]

Doesn't look too bad. The black symbol is noticeably blurrier than the rest of the artwork and, personally, not a fan of the dot/line effect on the face. The text "ACID RAIN BURNS" is also a bit hard to make out with the letters all touching. Aside from that, you should probably use more gradients - maybe in the background. As a whole, it looks very plain.

 

[arnarbatman]

It is difficult to read the font. If you practice you will improve.

 

[Pul5ifi3dHD]

1. There seems to be too many focal points in the avatar, which could draw away from the main focus of the avatar its self.
   
2. Text can be kind of difficult as it is usually something that flows well with the design itself.
   
3. From personal experience, I would say limit yourself to 1 image as a focus point and work around it.

Doing this will help you to branch out slowly as to what works and what doesn't, and it will improve your designing skills from a 360 degree angle, but at your own pace.