Another one? [Feedback?]

[mello]

Made another beat, think it came out pretty good. What do you guys think?

https://soundcloud.com/theartistdt/spring-prod-by-tadt

Taking any feedback and constructive criticism thanks! <3

 

[Thorium]

The introduction isn't bad, but I noticed that the hi-hat tends to be off-beat. I'm not too sure if this is intentional but it doesn't seem to line up with the rest of the instruments. Overall not bad.

 

[mello]

The introduction isn't bad, but I noticed that the hi-hat tends to be off-beat. I'm not too sure if this is intentional but it doesn't seem to line up with the rest of the instruments. Overall not bad.

Thanks! Yeah I intentionally made them off-beat but I think I made it slightly too off beat.
Thanks for your feedback! <3

 

[Bloo]

Sounds good, keep moving forward !

 

[Energized]

Sounds good, good vibe !
Keep it up :thumbup1: