Need some assistance

[ExoArcher]

So im looking into getting an esports style logo made for my self. this is the concept ive sent to my artist. can iget some info / suggestions from anyone?
oh it will include my name at the bottom that is a detachable layer for different situations.

 

[mattycs]

Not into mascot logos myself but looks like you got a plan and that's always good. I'm sure it will turn out amazing