Story of the houses! #1

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PotatoCannon

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A made up story about the houses. (sorry if one house seems dominate)

The Dam Busters : STRAND
The Foreign Legion : ALL
Hell Hounds : FLASH
Imperial Guard : AVALANCHE
The Raiders : DONNER
The Reservoir Dogs : FLASH
The Sewer Rats : KALT


DONNER
The story starts in a town called Donner. A group of people were walking through, they called then selfs the Foreign Legion. They were a good bunch of people. They had soldiers from all around the world and were searching for a place to stay. They had heard Donner was a great place but when they got there all they saw were ruined houses, destoryed tanks and guns layed all around. They were scared they only had rifles and BIG guns did this damage.
Then while walking through the town Angreifen came out from the shadows and suddenly all of the Foreign Legion were trapped!
"Why do you come through our town of peace"? Asked angreifen in his booming voice.
"Town of peice? More like town of destruction" Replyed k0nk0n.
"We were just attacked by dogs." He stated.
"Well we are the foreign legion we are looking for a home."
"We are the raiders."
So they left together now off to kalt where it is said to be the biggest city.

KALT

BOOM BOOM BOOM
"OPEN FIRE !"
"WATCH OUT BEHIN....BOOM"
They were hidden as the soldiers known as Sewer Rats were pinned town by the Reservoir dogs. The Sewers rats were getting pushed back and they lost both of there mg's.
"We have to fight!" Said Angreifen.
"No we can not" k0nk0n replyied.
"IF WE DON'T THEY WILL D..."
BOOM
The sewers under them crashed and there were 20 Sewer Rats.
"I am Mongo and this is my troupe we must run!"
Nobody argued as they ran until Angreifen asked "Where do we go now?"
"Avalanche". There was no more discussion.

AVALANCHE

"Good no booms" said angreifen.
"STOP! YELLED LadyLuck. You are not allowed to be here, we are perparing for war."
"With who?" Asked k0nk0n?
"The Flash groups of course."
"Why not fight them instead of wait for them to attack you?"
"......That's a good point. SOLDIERS MOVE OUT!"
And 200 soldiers came there.
"Wow" "wow" "WOW"
Then angreifen got up and said "Let's go and fight, fight for our homes, fight for our FREEDOM!"
HURRAY HURRAY HURRAY!
And they marched out to Flash.

FLASH

Capking with his right hand men Insurge and MrQ were discussing battle plans.

"We know they are coming we do not have enough troops to hold them off." Insisted Insurge.
"I say we run".
"We will not run, we have tanks they don't how can they defeat us?"Capking put in.
"Enough! MrQ yelled. We will fight."
"I AM IN CHARGE NOT YOU." Screamed Capking
Then Chuckles walked in with his right hand man Foxhound.
"You have a meeting with out us?" Said Chuckles.
"We don't have time for this!" Proclaimed Capking.
BOOM
"SEE THEY ARE HERE!"

Everyone ran out where soldiers from the Foreign Legion, The Raiders, Imperial Guard and the Sewers Rats were firing.Then Angreifen snuck up behind the leaders Chuckles, Foxhound, Insurge and Capking but MrQ was gone. Then Insurge turned with a MP40 and shot angreifen in the leg but then was tied up. Angreifen was ok though because he used !medic to heal himself.
They then held a meeting and decided that Foreign Legion will take flash and the others will return to there homes and rebuild. As for The Reservoir Dogs and Hell hounds there were sent to the prison.

Meanwhile......

STRAND

"This is good. MrQ announced to the Dam Buster leader Greenlight Terror.
We will wait one week when our forces are ready and draw them to this beach where we will knock them down!"(BUT THEN ALL HELL BROKE LOOSE WHEN IT WAS KNOW THAT STRAND HAD BEEN IMPENETRABLE FOR YEARS, SO THE RETREATED BACK ON THEIR PUNY BOATS AND THATS HOW THE DAM SAGA GOES)Sorry m8 it was DAM small for the houseThe end...for now.

The next will be in one week this will be a trilogy.
I am sorry to any leaders that were not mentioned tell me and you will be in the next if you would like. If you were in this and would like to be taken out please pm me i am sorry.
Any ideas? pm me!
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Of course he should mind his Grandmother. It is always best to show respect to one's elders.
 
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Interesting story, but you should have drug it out a lot more, but still an excellent story, just your grammar had errors here and there.
 
BUT THEN ALL HELL BROKE LOOSE WHEN IT WAS KNOW THAT STRAND HAD BEEN IMPENETRABLE FOR YEARS, SO THE RETREATED BACK ON THEIR PUNY BOATS AND THATS HOW THE DAM SAGA GOES

WHOOOOO GO DAM BUSTERS... i like that story... good job.

Kalt maybe your town,
Avalanche maybe your city,
Donner maybe your home,
But STRAND is our FORTRESS.
- THE DAM BUSTERS.
 
1. OMG MY GRAMMAR WAS BAD :O who cares really? I did this quick not publishing it :O
2. DAM will get much more reconision later.
 
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