The intro is still bad. Also, the 28,000 number looks good, but it is an obvious attempt to impress. The function of the wiki is to inform, from a neutral point, without bias. You don't get to impress, but you get to provide accurate information. Break down that number and say how many active members, how many admins, and how many hits the website sees every day, and how many unique players the servers see every month. When i would talk with JohnT he would give me those numbers. Then you can add the 28 000 number in the website section. And where do you get the 28 000 number, you need to provide a source and link it so people can verify the truth of that?
You don't need to tell people when it was formed in the introduction, that's why you have a history section. I would address general and current status in the introduction.
And the structure is still lacking severely.
Try this structure, not necessarily in that order.
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[[Image:Header_logo.png|link=http://www.edgegamers.org|Edgegamers Organization]]
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'''EdgeGamers Organization''' is a gaming community who has been around since 2006. Recently having obtained sponsors from numerous PC companies such as [http://www.cyberpowerpc.com/ CyberPower Inc]. They offer what they call "free admin," which allows administrator rights to members who participate well and show that they have what it takes to handle their numerous servers. As of March 2010, they have over 28,400 forum members.
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==History, Principles and Objectives, Structure, and Supported Games==
===History===
===Principles and Objectives===
====Rules of Conduct====
===Structure===
===Supported Games===
==Events==
====Calendar of Events====
==Forums and Communication==
====EdgeGamers Forums====
====Steam Groups====
====FBG====
====Ventrilo====
====IRC====
====XFire====
====GameTracker====
==Servers==
====Day of Defeat: Source====
====Team Fortress 2====
====Counter-Strike: Source====
====Call of Duty 4====
====Call of Duty: World at War====
====Insurgency====
====Bad Company 2====
====Battlefield 1942====
====Pirates, Vikings, and Knights II====
==Leadership==
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==Impact==
====Admin Training====
====MAUL====
== Controversy==
==Homepage==
==External Links==
==Sources==