eGO beta Commericial on youtube.

[joshcash]

eGO Commericial on youtube.

Hey this is a very early beta version of a commercial I'm working on. Tell me what you think or how I can improve it thanks. [ame]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r166PRWkNWE[/ame]

 

[shadowz2795]

a men to that!!!

 

[joshcash]

thanks

 

[frantic.^]

Wow that was pretty good! I loved every second of it and it made me proud to be in eGO. The only thing that i would even consider editing is to not make is seem so much like we are huge. Display that, yes, he have thousands of members, but NOT make that the reason to join. You should probably include something about how we are all about MATURITY and ethics. Doesn't have to be the theme, but definitely needs to be in there. (imo)

 

[joshcash]

thanks good point

 

[Falco]

Really good video, and is good that you have it on beta cause there's room for improvement(which is good too).
1)What Frantic said. Remember that this is an Organization of mature players which like to play on punk free servers. It is essential (imho) to present it on the video. That way we filter a little the people that come to us from the video.
2) Try adding some background effects (like game play). That way, eGO look a little more game directed for those who don't know us. I know it may sound silly, but it does make a difference.

 

[joshcash]

sweet idea im get footage of the games we are currently affliated with thanks for support

 

[Endiment]

just a few things: eGO technically was born July 5, 2006. second, our raffles are usually monthly. I like where this is going, it just needs some gameplay and stuff like that.

 

[joshcash]

thanks ill change it man
thanks for the input

 

[joshcash]

Hopefully I will have another beta up by tonight

 

[whohitme]

Its looking good man...I think I would just make some of the beginning info stuff a little quicker, seemed to move a little on the slow side. Keep it up!

 

[cooley]

dont we have 6 divisioms?

 

[pharmastore]

guys look at what i just made with my pirated sony vegas!

 

[joshcash]

Its not pirated.

 

[pharmastore]

Its not pirated.

lol you actually bought vegas

or you're lying

 

[Uka Uka]

dont we have 6 divisioms?

We have 5 main divisions... DoD, TF2, CS:S, CoD, INS and then i think we have small division talk like L4D in the Misc Game Discussion... And more idk...

 

[joshcash]

Yeah im focusing on the main 5

 

[Ravinx]

guys look at what i just made with my pirated sony vegas!

pharmastore please dont accuse people of stealing or pirating in a public forum its very rude and inconsiderate joking or not

 

[pharmastore]

pharmastore please dont accuse people of stealing or pirating in a public forum its very rude and inconsiderate joking or not

no

 

[xenophek]

Be careful about using copyrighted music. YouTube's been cracking down on that.

A good source for free royalty free music is www.incompetech.com